I know the writing style looks odd, or even disjointed to some people. But I am convinced that Stephen Richards did it deliberately this way. It could be a kind of hypnotic writing that doesn't mean to be read by the intellectual part of our mind. This is more of a manual than an introductory guide. The purpose is to help people to place their cosmic orders successfully, rather than a research of what cosmic ordering is. Incidentally, I personally am interested in almost all areas he covers in different stages of my life, so to me the materials are not irrelevant at all.
I like the book because the author uses his first-person experience and professional knowledge to help people. And you will find that he does take responsibility of what he wrote if you follow the Qs and As on his website, where it also shows he has profound knowledge of what he is doing. This is an author of real humanity.